Kyle p
25/9/2015 09:23:23 am
I was walking through the spooky woods and suddenly I seen a petrifying monster. I was so scared,I could see a monster starin at me like he wants to eat me.I could not believe my eyes.He was like a half snapped tree it was creepy.He was stood in the middle of the river and he was as big as the Eifel tower.The monster was holding a dead baby pig and he was eating it.
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The misterious creature is holding a dead rat in the dark gloomy and damp forest.It looks like he/or she is looking for flesh it has an arrow in the rat because a elf/or human has shot it with a bow,for food but the sticky wood creature or monster picked it up he tried looking for the foe who killed it. The creature is in a lake he might be firsty so he went to get some water but he must have found the dead animal.
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Katie H
25/9/2015 09:29:36 am
It is a mysterious forest with a monster which has got an animal in it hand. If you look in the bottom left hand corner there is a person hiding from the monster. The river is not a nice blue it is a grey type of water. You can see the sun light coming through the trees. The grass is all blurry and the trees are all old and the top of the trees are all moist and so is the ground. There are rocks by the water and they look like animals. The monster is all made out of branches so how does he stay up. I think he is looking for the person that is hiding be hind the tree.
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KyleJR
25/9/2015 09:30:58 am
As the mysterious swampy wood creature stomps down the river lurking to find a friend but the citizens don't know that,their minds are like a tornado spun around thinking what's going to happen to them will they be ate will they escape no one knows.As the monster holds the wolf he finds hope that he will find a friend,usually people have teddys to hold but that wolf was the first friend he had but what happened to him is still a mystery,people spread rumours that the wood monster had ate it but it is still a mystery a mystery not told....
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Jake.s
25/9/2015 09:37:37 am
I think this scene is in a dark scary forest with a mysterious monster what looks like a tree and has paper on his head the big monster has loads of spikes on his back and his feet are round like circles and he has no eyes the monster has a dead rat in his hand with a sleeping dart in its necks
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Sam M
25/9/2015 09:43:52 am
A scary damp wood with a horrifying creature in a dirty old lake the creature is made out of moldy dirty wood
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Ruby.s
25/9/2015 09:43:54 am
This is mysterious and scary the monster is gloomy and he's feet are as big as a elephant and that why he's feet are under water. The gloomy monsters name is gloomiest and he lives under the water.
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Kieran.V
25/9/2015 09:47:03 am
There is a colossal figure roaming the forest ,looking for something to eat ,the figure is holding something that looks like a little dead rat uncooked and raw ,maybe hunting for humans as stealthy as a predator approaching his prey... He looks like he has bandages all around him. He is undiscovered and unknown the only one of his kind
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