But as the leaves rustled…
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But as the leaves rustled…
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adam.h
11/9/2015 06:06:09 pm
But as the leaves rustled on the bushes. I stop and looked behind me and I saw some dark gloomy shadows coming closer and closer but then they vanished… I look in front of me there were two tall people trying to grab me so I ran away from them. But they found me and one of them grabbed me with the grip of a stray dog. They had me in there grips I could not escape but I was wrong…I quickly pulled my hand out of his grip and ran and ran away back home to my loving family
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Scarlett.D
12/9/2015 10:48:56 am
But as the leaves rustled through the night it became more louder and louder as the night moved on it was finally morning and this big chubby dog ran as fast as lightning down the muddy scruffy stairs. About two minutes later he finally go to his bowl that was full of dog food anyway his dog carer Emily let thunder out to the garden and it started raining so he got to go back in and Emily told him to get into the bath so he zoomed up the stairs.5 minutes later he was splashing about because he loved the bath not like some dogs so Emily whispered "time to get out" so he went down the stairs to get dried of.
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Adil ali
13/9/2015 01:59:49 pm
But as the laves rustled I noticed a shadow out of the corner of my eye. I felt scared ,didn't know want to do so I started to run away. Then I heard noises behind me so I started panicking. So I hunted for my phone in my pocket then called the police because of the pyscho behind me trying to kill me. so because I was faster then the guy i could hide behind the enormous tree. Then I was waiting for the police to arrive I kept very, very quiet.The man did not come back.
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Ruby s
14/9/2015 05:39:21 pm
But as the leaves rustled I was scared, so I looked out the horrible window and it was the trees rusting side to side. I couldn't get to sleep all night long and I just fell a sleep when we had to get up for school, so I had no sleep at all. I went to school and I wanted to go and tell my best friend what had happen last night and what time I fell asleep, but they put their backs to me, but all day I was thinking what have I done wrong to make them upset, so I decided to go to Jessica a girl from my class who was very quite and we became best friends and we went on adventures and had sleepover together, so we are best friends now.
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Sam M
15/9/2015 03:24:45 pm
But as the leaves rustled I was surprised to see a Hedgehog hiding in the undergrowth.When I looked closer he looked really thin and shabby but he didn't run away, it was obvious he was very hungry. I tried to pick him up to take him indoors to show Mum but the little rascal decided to roll into a ball and prick me with his sharp spikes.I discovered that hedgehogs eat cat food and mealworms. I fed him these daily until he looked well again, he wandered off but sometimes he comes to visit me in my garden.
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Aron.c
15/9/2015 03:57:29 pm
But as the leaves rustled,I regretted taking the short cut home.I promised my mum Id be home by 9.30,it was now 9.20.It was dark as the nights were drawing in and the wind was starting to pick up.I didn't remember coming this way before and was aware of something large and gloomy ahead of me.It was a creepy old house that looked like it had been abandoned for years,yet I'm sure I saw someone looking back at me from a window.I turned around and ran back to take the long way home.
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jake,s
15/9/2015 06:26:19 pm
but as the leaves rustled flouting though the air the dog barking loudly the house in the country side trees swaying twigs snapping children playing in the fallen brown leaves while the adults are drinking tea and having dinner next to their warm fire waiting for their child's company the children craving for their dinner wanting to go and play again with all thier friends
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Ryan W
16/9/2015 03:38:11 pm
But as the leaves rustled, the sky turned dark grey and foggy. It began to feel very cold and spooky. I looked all around and all i could see was bright yellow eyes, angrily looking at glaring at me. All of a sudden I started running as fast as my feet could go. My heart was beating like a petrified tiny trapped animal. This is when i realised i was lost, far away from home well thats what I thought. I continued on my journey far deep into the woods and thats when I heard howling from a distance like some sort of creature or a wolf. I looked all around and i felt my full body shaking from fear. That is then when i realised I wasn't all alone and I looked up and noticed it was a full moon. I began to run as quickly as I could, pushing my way through the tall, skinny tree branches like a machete. I could hear the busy traffic, driving past in the distance and I continued to walk and that is when i had reach the city. I was save! I was home !
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courtney p
17/9/2015 06:55:30 am
But as the leaves rustle i seen a fox running in the busshes so i went to see what it was and it was a fox with all her cubs the little cub came crawling to me and started sniffing me so i picked it up and the mother fox seen me and started running after me so i ran and hid in a forest behind a tree and carried on running and then she seen me so i ran and ran and i couldnt run anymore so she got me and what happend next...........
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