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It was as if it had never happened. The light had gone out. Nothing. Not a sound...
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Continue your story from this opening... It was as if it had never happened. The light had gone out. Nothing. Not a sound...
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Molly.s
18/9/2015 08:54:45 am
it was as if it had never happened.The light had gone out. Not a sound only then the sound picked up as I watched the dancers the music started then it was the end of the dance had come ,the applause was humunges I couldn't hear my self think.i can't believe just that dance had brunge thousands of people on there feet. I was thinking maybe I could do that again but after my leg injury maybe I couldn't do it again Well if I could,in a couple weeks I would be ready to hit the stage the sound of the cheers dancing around me cheerfully .
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Leahm
18/9/2015 08:55:22 am
It was as if it never had never happened.The light had gone out . Nothing.Not a sound. Keira and Mellissa started to shake as the lit candle had gone out . " you don't think it was a ghost... do you?" said Mellissa."No don't be silly ghosts aren't real!"replied keira. The wind suddenly picked up whistling through the trees the two sisters went closer and closer up to the candle they lit it again the fire glowed in their blue eyes as they slowly stepped away back onto the couch."oooohhh"the ghost gave a funny sound to the terrified girls as their mum bursted into the room as the girls had a relived look on their faces."Finally" said the girls." What went on whilst I was out!" " we heard a ghost and he kept on blowing out the candle
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Erin br
18/9/2015 08:55:46 am
It was as if it had never happened.The light had gone out.Nothing.Not a sound,only the wind whistling in the distance and trees shaking in the field.Rosie was alone in the woods,scared she carried on going however she did not want to .Horribly she had heard horrible stories of witches and ghosts and although this may be hard for you to believe Rosie was only seven and alone.As she carried on going she got knocked over by a scared deer running,now she was worried although the deer was actually running from Rosie's brave mum.
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Sebastian R
18/9/2015 08:56:27 am
It was if it had never happened. The light had gone out. Nothing. Not a sound. It was the afternoon and I couldn't hear anything my family would normally be downstairs but for some reason they weren't... I began to get scared because I'm never normally in the house on my own, but I decided to be brave and make myself some dinner. I made myself brunch with sausage, egg and bacon on toast. It was delicious and by far the best brunch I've ever had. It has nearly been two hours since my family has not been in the house so I started to play on the Xbox One. I played FIFA 15. But when I was in the middle of a game I heard something on the door. Suddenly I rushed down to see what it was. IT WAS MY FAMILY!!!!!! I have never been happier so I asked them were have they been and they said they went to Thorpe park (the king of roller coasters) and tried to wake me up but I didn't wake up. I was quite mad that I didn't go but at least now I'm with my supportive family. The End
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Sam.c
18/9/2015 08:56:34 am
It was like it had never happened. The light had gone out .nothing not a sound...Then THUD it was an earthquake buildings falling down on people it was terrifying and I was scared to my very core.Then all of a sudden it stopped but five minutes later it started again and the next minute a alarm went off it was a tsunami luckily I was fine for a minute then the water risen. A boat fell on me I went right through the window so I was safe.Then it all stopped the city was a absolute mess.
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Charlotte
18/9/2015 08:56:34 am
It was as if it never happened. The light had gone out. Nothing. Not a sound...
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Jake.h
18/9/2015 08:56:38 am
It was as if it had never happened.The light had gone out.Nothing.Not a sound.Rapidly I got out of bed to see what was there but nothing stood.All I could here was the wind howling through the sky.Suddenly I heard something it sounded like a beam.So I got my phone turned on the flash light and went down.It was unbelievelble something shiny it looked like a diamond!Or was it it shined like the sun but moved like a mouse.Suddenly it jumped.Creeply,it jumped so high I couldn't catch it. Then it disappeared...
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Rain.b
18/9/2015 08:56:48 am
It was as if it had never happened.The light had gone out.Nothing.Not a sound the streets power has been cut by zombies.The world will end soon we all know it there is only faith in one person called professor Fred .Amazingly we have two solutions die or we could get the great Professor Fred to make us all special suits that will protect us from the zombies and we could touch the cables and make the power come back ................... Help........... Sory aout tat e ombe ow bleh bleh bleh.
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Stephanie.D
18/9/2015 08:56:51 am
It was as if it never happened. the light had gone out. Nothing. Not a sound... Until they heard something, something that was trying to escape or spying on us. How it got in we don't know who or what it is we don't know but all I know my two best friends (Amanda and Rily) know as well.
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Charlie W
18/9/2015 08:57:18 am
It was as if it had never happened. The light had gone out. Nothing. Not a sound. It was 2041 and the zombie appocolips had broken out. I'm Alisha and I'm 16 I live in LA with my Mum and her Boyfriend, also my brother. This year the zombie virus spread out so instead of people dying they came back dead but walking and having a love for eating brains!
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Kayleigh.A
18/9/2015 08:58:02 am
It was as if it had never happened. The light gone out. Nothing. Not a sound... Suddenly after a few minutes of deafening silence. Still no sound, no nothing. Some how it started to thunder and lightning then we got out of the house as quick as we could then we watch our house crash to the ground as we watched our house tumble we felt the ground shake... It was an earth quake we watched other people rush out of their homes and watch their homes tumble to the ground with most of their belongings. My cat, Mya, died 😔
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Erin B
18/9/2015 08:59:38 am
It was if it never happened. The light had gone out. Nothing. Not a sound...
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