Go for it! 1-2-3 SPLASH!
Imagine you are the diver in the image. Describe in detail what you can see and how the experience makes you feel. Be adventurous with your language choices and vary your sentence openers. Wow each other with your descriptive writing.
Go for it! 1-2-3 SPLASH!
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Charlie W
8/9/2015 08:50:05 am
The beautiful coral glows ruby red under the shining sun of the sky. fish swim by the most lovely colours. The sun brightly sheds its light sparkling and making scales from the fish look like a thousand stars. Nothing can ruin this peace and tranquility. The emeral sea weed flogs like a Raging fire. A thousand little fish swim around there home of the coral.
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Miss Crawford
9/9/2015 07:36:05 pm
Well done Charlie. You have used some interesting language choices and used a simile for effect. Try to vary your sentence openers and link ideas with connectives.
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Charlie W
11/9/2015 09:28:22 am
Ok 😊
Stephanie.D
8/9/2015 08:58:56 am
I've just dived into the deep shimmering blue water and the first things I see are a school of beautiful fish swimming around in the coulorful maze like coral. Other fish are swimming around not bothered about anyone. It's like a picture bursting with amazing coulors making it even more spectacular then it actually is. There are coulors everywhere with all kinds of fish everywhere you look, so there is nothing not to like about it. Some fish are shy some are not bothered by you are all different, some times they will swim right up to your face to check you out to see if your friendly or not. It's so magnificent you don't know what to feel!
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Charlotte
15/9/2015 06:11:54 pm
love it Steph 😀
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Charlotte
8/9/2015 08:59:04 am
I just dived into the crystal blue sea. Stright away I can see a beautiful carp swimming with a bunch of shimmering tiny fish. I think I might go deeper. I feel like a small fish in a big sea. I am amazed of how calm the fish act when I'm around them.Coral surrounds me as I try to avoid the shark its circling around me but not even thinking of bitting me.My hart is racing I keep thinking I'm running out of air or am I... As I get deeper I get more comfident more fish like a carp,pike,stingray (if that counts as a fish) and much much more.i feel so alive and that anything is possible.Look there's a reef reminds me of nemo.Wow I just saw a net fish swimming in and not getting out poor things.Astonished,amazing and overwhelmed they are the words to describe my feeling right now.O I have to go but wait I just saw a great white shark #huge.Ok I have to go bye
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Sam C
8/9/2015 09:05:09 am
I feel a bit scared and also curious about all these under water caves and the coral is beautiful and I love the amazing variety of fish and there colour. I would be scared because there could be shark in one of those caves. And also I would be scared of getting poisioned by one of those plants or one of the fish. But apart from that I would be really peaceful and excited.
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Molly S
8/9/2015 09:11:06 am
As I wonder the exotic ocean,I can see tropical fish,coral and seaweed as green as freshly cut grass. I'm surprised that the water is sparkling as much a as diamond,a white shark swoops pasts and wips me with its enormous fin its teeth look like sharp kitchen knives and its beady eyes glare at me like its gonna snap its wide jaw at me. I see an octopuse with the longest tenticles ever with the most suckers on them.So I keep on swimming through and it is calm as a relaxing spa fish swimming in there own little groups as they look for food.
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LeahM
8/9/2015 09:12:09 am
As I dive below the deep blue sea,coral appears all around me . The light blinds me as the deafening sound of my heart beat fills the ocean as I found a school of fish swimming towards me .It was the best feeling that I had ever felt I couldn't wait to tell everyone! I suddenly saw a pair of tentacles that is when I slowly paddled away I knew it was the right time to leave. As I stumbled out of the sea a whale sprayed me with salt water I guessed that was its way of saying goodbye.
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Sebastian R
8/9/2015 09:13:14 am
As soon as I dived in all I saw was a lot of beautiful scaled little fish swimming away from me. Plus as I moved forward I saw more fish and some I have never seen before. When I looked behind me I saw an orca and it was massive I had never seen a bigger orca than that before. Then I started to swim down and began to see clown fish, some where quite big but some were really small and as I began to search forward I saw a ginormous octopus. I never thought that I would be this close to so many amazing fish and the ocean was so azure and so clear. But then I felt something swimming behind me but under me aswell, it was a shark!! I kept calm but I was still scared but now I can tell all my friends that I actually swam next to a shark. It was the best feeling of life.😆
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Kayleigh.A
8/9/2015 09:14:30 am
When I look around I can see: Rainbow coloured coral, fish swimming luxoiriosly around the coral reef, sea snakes lying on the surface of the sea, eels lurking in the caves and striking as quick as lightning, enormous sun fish above my head as the sun shines it's rays through the sea's stunning waves, anemones waving in the sea's gentle wind, Octopusses acting curios around when I reached the coral reef. The coral reef looks like someone had splashed paint all over their canvas when they were painting, the coral reef is like a rainbow
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