- An -ly opener
- One or more of these connectives: although, despite, however
- An interesting setting description
- The introduction of a character
- A simile or metaphor
'The' as a sentence opener is banned!
I'm looking forward to reading your work.
Write an exciting opening to a story that will make the reader want to read more and more. Your story opening should contain:
'The' as a sentence opener is banned! I'm looking forward to reading your work.
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Charlie W
11/9/2015 08:55:00 am
Emma was sat in the long grass over looking her farm house. Emma was almost 16 and lived in Newcastle she loved her life, being Farmer and helping the animals. But one day her dad said he was giving up his job as a farmer, moving to the city and being a principle at Spoden High School. I was to go there as well.
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Sebastian R
11/9/2015 09:27:09 am
Getting up swiftly, Mitch finally got out of bed and although he was tired he still had to play football. But first Mitch had to get breakfast he had bacon and egg on toast to give him energy for the football game but because he took his time he only had 20 minutes to get there. Mitch ran as quick as lighting to get up the stairs and get changed Into his bright red football kit. Despite the fact that he didn't finish his breakfast he just wanted to get to the football pitch to play football. But now he only had 5 minutes and then it takes 5 minutes to get there so will he make it....
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Lilly.k
11/9/2015 09:27:18 am
Quietly I lay on my bed (which is a cover stuffed with straw) thinking about what will happen tomorrow if this happend today well I will just have to see.However lets start from the beginning my name is Tom and I am a soldier in world war 2.I am here because my father fights in the war and now that I am old enough I can join him in his terrifying adventure of war life...
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Kayleigh.A
11/9/2015 09:27:21 am
Suddenly, as she opened the gate, large, black Dobermans jumped up, trying to get the unnamed girl,😱, as she cautiously walked through the garden, the gnomes looked like they were watching her, Lucy, as they called her, always wore black, a black dress or top and skirt, black leggings or tights and black boots, the reason why she wears these is so she can stay in the shadows no matter what day, month, season it is. Also it makes 'Lucy' look like a shadow as well, she loved black, every single piece of clothing she wears is black everything she owns is black even her house is black.This story is about the unnamed girl
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Stephanie.D
11/9/2015 09:27:25 am
It was a calm sunny day by the sea side where people where sunbathing and swimming in the cyristal clear sea, however
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Charlotte. P
11/9/2015 09:27:28 am
It was a calm day in the meadows. Birds chirping, bees buzzing, flowers growing - basically a lovely sunny day. Ahead you can see the seaside with the crystal blue sea almost as clear as the sky. Next to the seaside there is a tiny cottage owned by a little lady and her husband. Their names are Barbra and Bill. Barbra is a wealthy lady with two children called Brook and Bob one girl, one boy as you can tell. Barbra has green eyes, pale skin, blonde hair, and the most beautiful smile ever. Bill on the other hand has blue eyes, brown hair,dark skin, and quiet lazy Brook is the most kindest child you could ever ask for. Lovely blonde hair,loves the outdoors pale skin , and a beautiful smile. Now we talk about Bob he is the EXACT same as his father. Athough they always argue the love each other there just afraid to say so.
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Sam.c
11/9/2015 09:27:34 am
Previously in a dark and gloomy forest a witch lived in the in a little cottage. and she had a magic couldren which she used to make magic spells. And one dark day she made a potion wrong and it made the cottage blow up. She did survive but her cottage didn't so she had to find some where else to live so she slept under a tree for a night. It was the morning and Lisa woke up and she started to find somewhere else to live. It took her three days to find another cottage but she finally found cottage that she liked so she went in. It was horrible inside but the witch could fix that with a magic spell.
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Jake.h
11/9/2015 09:28:23 am
In a galaxy far far away 3 great heroes have come to save the day.Planet earth is about to get hit by a meteor that's as big as the sun!However the only thing that can save us are the voldamores.There sign is \#>.There / stands for the sword of jaguar the # is the shield of rhino and the > stands for healing of dragon.
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Leahm
11/9/2015 09:28:41 am
The night of the thunder storm
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Erin br
11/9/2015 09:28:42 am
This is the woods full of mystical creatures and animals of all shapes and sizes🐑🐧🐡 and this is Robbin🙋.Now let me tell you a bit about her, she is very small and around 10 years old,she comes here every Friday to collect berries from the big round berry bush in the centre of the woods but this time something very different happend!There was a wizard turning every creature into horrible nasty wolfs which Robbin did not know about!Now the only thing she knew was everywhere was rich with joy and overflowing with happiness especially in penny ville cross but obviously not this time.Can Robbin stop the wizard and bring back love!!!
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Rain.b
11/9/2015 09:29:56 am
Suddenly... The earth started to shake , it was a small earthquake andthe little Kingdom would be ruined so all the fairies and elves set of for the big city to meet Leane little girl who is a little girl to us but to all those fairies and elves they were called big people and you never know were a big person will step with there big feet. Mark the elf and dina the fairy princess were exited to see Leane again because the last time they saw her was when nanny pie was doing her tooth-fairy rounds and nanny pie couldn't get any signal for her fairy phone so she couldn't get the window (there exit) open.anyway Leane had chocolate brown hair it was short but it went well with her emerald green eyes.
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Molly.s
11/9/2015 09:30:13 am
Suddenly I heard a voice coming from the barren room...
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Erin B
11/9/2015 09:30:54 am
"Slowly Jason we don't want to wake it" whispered Mya.
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Erin B
21/10/2015 05:55:19 pm
One normal day in a normal town in a normal street in a normal city lived a normal group of people. They were called Lenny, Kate, Noah, Lydia and Perry.
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